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As for "Advanced Critique Encouraged", I'd say hold of on the watermark just a bit ^^;

Also, try not to make the background a little pixely or blurry, unless intentional.

Oh, and there's something about her left eye that bothers me a bit. Don't know what, yet.

Anyway, good job! I love the colours!
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Watermark- would you suggest smaller, or lighter? I was a bit...exaggerated, on the watermark because I had just finished this picture as my friend's art had been stolen. D=

I'm sorry but could you try and be a little bit more specific as far as the eye goes? Uneven maybe? The eyebrow is defiantly too high up.
Too big? Her head is too large,so maybe the eye as well...? =X


Thank you so much for critiquing!
Don't get me wrong I love being complemented but it really makes me happy to learn how to improve. It's really appreciated and thank you very much for the favorite. :D

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"...If I was completely predictable, but trying to be random, I would be Family Guy."--The Ninja from 'AskaNinja.com
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I'd say make it lighter. Aw, man, that sucks.

Yeah, I think it is the eyebrow. Also, her right eye looks a lot like just a dot with an eyebrow. Maybe make the lines a bit thinner and try not to be afraid of adding detail.

I think the head is fine, maybe a little big on the minor side.

No problem! If you want me to critique again/more, just let me know!
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Ok,thanks.
I really see what you mean about the lines on the eye being too thick now. I'm experimenting with lineart now actually, so I'm glad you brought that up.

Oh! Please do! Rip it to shreds >3
It's so nice having someone able to help me improve, I can't see the flaws so much in my own art when it's newer so it's nice to have outside eyes =]

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"...If I was completely predictable, but trying to be random, I would be Family Guy."--The Ninja from 'AskaNinja.com

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